i wanna say thank u but the fact that u can feel those lines is also heart wrenching. ❤️🩹 like woah obviously thank u but someone feeling my poems or the feelings inside always leave me speechless (especially one as raw and haunting)! <3
The imagery in this poem is stunning, but what stayed with me most was the ending. The idea of leaving the grave only to return and dig it deeper is such a heartbreaking portrayal "My saviour who was not set in stone"- loved this line.Beautifully work.
thank u so much for reading and for this comment!! ❤️🩹 i always thrive on imagery in poetry — it makes the picture so much vivid and immersive. im really glad you liked it!
I love the line about letting the words bleed onto the paper. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
ooo thank you! i loved writing this as well. it really does feel like that sometimes. turning the blood into ink. <3
"digging my grave deeper this time" this line gave me little goosebumps. So good. Keep it up.
I could feel every line of this poem. Absolutely amazing.
i wanna say thank u but the fact that u can feel those lines is also heart wrenching. ❤️🩹 like woah obviously thank u but someone feeling my poems or the feelings inside always leave me speechless (especially one as raw and haunting)! <3
The imagery in this poem is stunning, but what stayed with me most was the ending. The idea of leaving the grave only to return and dig it deeper is such a heartbreaking portrayal "My saviour who was not set in stone"- loved this line.Beautifully work.
thank u so much for reading and for this comment!! ❤️🩹 i always thrive on imagery in poetry — it makes the picture so much vivid and immersive. im really glad you liked it!